(j3.2006) another example of a forward reference

Malcolm Cohen malcolm
Fri Mar 13 04:51:34 EDT 2015


Bob Corbett suggests:
<<<
I suggest that paragraph 5 of Clause 4.2 be split into two paragraphs,
as the two sentences in the paragraph have nothing to do with each
other.
>>>

That is a good point, actually the same can be said of the last sentence of p4.

In fact maybe the first sentences of p4 and p5 should be the new p4, and the 
second sentences thereof can be the new p5?

I will include these suggestions in an editorial paper for next time.  (I think 
the wording might need a little more work though.)

Cheers,
-- 
................................Malcolm Cohen, Nihon NAG, Tokyo. 




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